Reflecting On My Workshop Experience.

It was kind of confusing, because almost every one in my team are a little shy, so we did not wanted to read our e-mails out loud. But at the end we had to, so we stared reading our e-mail to the others. The workshop that we had helped me alot because, all the members in my group told me a lot of good things about my e-mail, but they also told me the errors that I made. Almost no one like to hear their errors but we relized that if we want to hava a nice e-mail we have to correct our errors. I asked them how can I make my e-mail more longer because I had just like three paragraphs with four sentenses each and it was not long enough. They suggested a lot of good things like, adding more details to my e-mail and be more specific about what I wanted to say. One of the opinions that I liked the most was the one about supporting my sentenses, that means that I have to show proof or evidence so that the teacher would understand and believed what I was saying. Also what I liked about the workshop was how important was our opinion to the other students. When one of the students started talking about hers, I notice that she has a lot to say, and I liked her e-mail, but I alsto have to let her know that she had made a little mistakes. She was so in to her e-mail that she wrote some feelings in there. And we are not supposted to be dramatic. I was a little shy to told her but, at the end I did it , what was my surprized, that she did not got mad or anything like that the only thing she said was " upps you are right I am mixing feelings and I am not supposed to, thanks Maria". So at the end I was ready to fix my paper and write those new ideas that they gave me . I really enjoyed working with them.