Reflect On The Difference Between Blog3 And The Etiquette Essay .

Let me tell you that there is a very big difference between the e-mail that I send to my friend and the one that I send to my teacher. Both of them were about the same problem, a bad grade that a teacher gave me and I believed it was unfair. When I wrote the e-mail to my friend Alicia I just grabbed my keyboard and the I started typing all my reasons why I desirved a better grade and how much time I spend studying, all of those things. When I was typing I did not have to worry about grammar or making my paragraphs long or anything like that. But when my teacher said that it was going to be for a teacher, I was so scared cecause I might not know all tha steps that we are suppose to followed but I sure knew that it was not going to be like my friend's e-mail. First of all you have to write a rough draft just to know what your are going to talked about. Then I went to the writing center and spend like half of an hour talking with one of the tutors about my draft. The tutor do not judge you they just listend and gives you better ideas. They also helped me make my e-mail longer and they show me how to find supporting details. They also help me with my grammar error, I went home and I started to write my e-mail like three times and when I turned it in, it was not perfect but now a least it look better. And for sure it does not look not even a little like the one I send to my friend. As you can see they are very different from each other. It took me less than 15 minutes to write an e-mail to my friend, but it took me almost four days to worked in the one that I was sending to my teacher. Maybe you are not going to believed me but I prefer the one that I send to my teacher because it looked more organized and more professional.